(First published in "The Computer Paper" sometime in 1998)
| When you're writing for
the Internet, pretend you're giving your readers a Twinkie--keep your offering
short and sweet, and symmetric.
"There are people who will gauge your intelligence by your script and we wouldn't want to mislead them, would we?" someone named Andrew once pointed out within a scathing e-mail sent to me after he had found a spelling mistake and a typo on one of my web pages. Andrew is right. When people come to your web site they will decide instantly just how seriously they should take you. They will make this decision almost completely based on your writing skills and how you choose to present your content. Let your thoughts and ideas be as unqiue as you are, but make sure your writing capabilites meticulous. Give them something pleasing to the mind and pleasing to the eye. I WANT TO TELL YOU SOMETHING...
-Try and be as descriptive as possible. Paint a clear picture upfront for your readers so they know immediately what you are presenting to them. -Refer directly to your
readers. For example,
-Get to the point. Impatience seems to be heightened while on the Internet. Your reader does not want to scroll through screen after screen to get the important information they are expecting. Know what you have to say and don't let it get buried under useless detail. HORS D'OEUVRES ANYONE??? Haven't you noticed that you spend more time skimming than reading while you are on the Web? Your readers are no different. Offer your words in bite-sized morsels that will haunt your readers even after they leave your site. -The shorter the better. I recommend trying to keep sentences less than 25 words when possible. Keep paragraphs short as well. Nothing longer than six-eight sentences should sustain your readers attention. When you're taking a knife to text, don't change your original message, but do use the least amount of words possible. -Organize well. After you've done the writing do some creative rearranging. Divide your information into logical clusters with each grouping of notes focusing on one specific topic. Be kind to your readers and let them decide what they want to read and what they want to skip over. -Give the ending away first. Put the most important data at the beginning of your writing. Follow that by the details that clarify your original point. Take advantage of knowing that your reader will concentrate on the first three sentences of your writing. Make an impact right off the top. HEADLINES Readers may come to your site looking for something specific. They will glance over the text looking for keywords, sentences, and paragraphs they are most interested in. They may also ignore the other messages you have are presenting. Headlines are beneficial to everyone. With a headline you can direct a reader to the information they are looking for. While at the same time, you can use creative headlines to draw them into passages of information they may have otherwise passed by. -Use keywords. Keywords will not only lure the reader to the text, they will also give a definite insight into what is about to follow. Keywords can also be riveting words that will make your reader stop. Isn't "Explosive New Software Package Will Change Your Life" more powerful than "New Software Package Is Great"? -Be imaginative. Being clever and witty is just as effective as being precise. Pique your reader's curiosity by teasing them and gently convincing them to spend more time reading your words. FINISHING TOUCHES You've written your text. You've arranged the information in order of importance. You've come up with amazing headlines to catch your reader's eye. Now, before you put it into HTML format, you have to check, check, and re-check for mistakes. -You don't have to be a Nobel-prize winning author. You do have to be aware. Do a spell check first. Then do a read through for any grammar mistakes or use the grammar-helper function within your word processor. I recommend putting your writing aside for awhile then go back and do another read-through. This time be on the look out for any grammar mistakes missed and any typos you didn't see before. Spell check won't point out when "us" is really supposed to be "is". If you need any help with
writing or editing visit these sites:
In Part Two I will give
you some tips on presenting your text in ways your readers will appreciate.
Between now and then, check out WORD (http://www.word.com). Learn
by their example and get some excellent ideas on how you can make text
more visually exciting.
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